SECTION 01
写作任务 · Writing Task
让我们先看清高考真题的命题方向与评分标准，做到心中有数。
📝 题目（真题情境）
假定你是学生会主席李华，暑假将至，请你写一则英文通知提醒全体同学注意防溺水安全。内容应包括：
- 切勿独自靠近河、湖、池塘等野外水域；
- 游泳需家长陪同，前往正规游泳馆；
- 遇他人落水，勿盲目下水，立刻呼救求助。
注意：① 词数 80 左右；
② 通知格式规范；
③ 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
SECTION 02
构思导图 · Brainstorm
把题目拆解为四个核心板块，逐一攻破。点击任意板块展开万能表达。
Background
背景引入：点明时间 / 季节 / 场合
• As the summer vacation is approaching, …
• With the arrival of July, …
• In hot weather, …
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Purpose
通知目的：发布主体 + 提醒事项
• The Students' Union would like to remind…
• This notice is intended to call on…
• We sincerely urge all students to…
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Safety Tips
安全建议：分点说明具体做法
• Never go swimming alone in rivers.
• If possible, swim under adult supervision.
• Once you see someone in danger, cry for help.
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Ending
结尾呼吁：重申主题 + 落款
• Put safety first and enjoy a safe summer.
• Let's work together for a safe campus.
• Your cooperation is highly appreciated.
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SECTION 03
篇章结构 · Structure
Notice 的标准四段结构，每一段都对应不同的写作功能与表达。
1
Opening
引出背景 / 缘由
As the summer vacation is approaching, water-related activities are increasing.
2
Body
分点说明注意事项
- Never + V … (严禁)
- … should be accompanied by …
- If / Once …, do …
- … should call for help immediately.
3
Ending
呼吁 / 落款
Put safety first and have a wonderful summer!
4
Signature
署名 / 日期
The Students' Union
July 5, 2025
SECTION 04
高分范文 · Excellent Sample
悬停句子可看中文翻译，点击句子高亮。整篇范文是考场满分水准。
Notice
随着暑假的临近，水上活动日益增多。
As the summer vacation is approaching, water-related activities are increasing.
学生会特此提醒全体同学增强防溺水意识。
The Students' Union would like to remind all of us to raise awareness of drowning prevention.
首先，绝不要独自前往河、湖或池塘等野外水域；
First of all, never go swimming alone in rivers, lakes or ponds without lifeguards.
如果想游泳，应在家长或教练的陪同下前往正规游泳馆。
If you want to swim, you should go to a proper swimming pool accompanied by your parents or coaches.
一旦发现有人落水，切勿贸然下水施救，而应立即呼救并寻求帮助。
Once you witness someone falling into water, do not rush into the water blindly but call for help immediately.
安全至上，祝大家度过一个安全愉快的暑假！
Put safety first and have a wonderful summer!
The Students' Union
July 5, 2025
SECTION 05
逐句精析 · Sentence Analysis
把范文中每一句拆成 4 个层次：原文 → 语法 → 写作功能 → 高分表达。
As the summer vacation is approaching, water-related activities are increasing.
高分表达
water-related activities 比 swimming 更高级
The Students' Union would like to remind all of us to raise awareness of drowning prevention.
语法分析
主语 + would like to + 动词 + 宾语 + 不定式
高分表达
would like to 比 want to 更正式
First of all, never go swimming alone in rivers, lakes or ponds without lifeguards.
语法分析
序数词 + 祈使句（Never + V …）
高分表达
without lifeguards 精准补充语境
If you want to swim, you should go to a proper swimming pool accompanied by your parents or coaches.
语法分析
If 条件状语从句 + 主句（含 should + 过去分词短语作状语）
写作功能
提出正确做法，先 If 再 should 形成对照
高分表达
accompanied by 替代 with，更书面
Once you witness someone falling into water, do not rush into the water blindly but call for help immediately.
语法分析
Once 时间/条件状语从句（现在分词作宾补）+ 并列祈使句 not … but …
写作功能
提出紧急情况处理，用 not…but… 形成对比
高分表达
call for help immediately 简洁有力
SECTION 06
词汇卡片 · Language Highlights
点击任意卡片翻转，看音标 / 中文 / 搭配 / 例句。
approach
/əˈproʊtʃ/ v.
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接近；临近
搭配：approach + n.
例：The vacation is approaching.
发布；发出
搭配：issue a notice
例：The Union issues a notice.
warn against
/wɔːrn əˈɡenst/
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警告不要做某事
搭配：warn sb. against (doing) sth.
例：Warn against swimming alone.
wander
/ˈwɑːndər/ v.
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闲逛；徘徊
搭配：wander around
例：Don't wander near the river.
intend
/ɪnˈtend/ v.
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打算；想要
搭配：intend to do
例：This notice is intended to remind…
accompany
/əˈkʌmpəni/ v.
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陪伴；陪同
搭配：accompanied by
例：Go with an adult.
witness
/ˈwɪtnəs/ v.
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目睹；见证
搭配：witness sth.
例：Once you witness an accident…
drowning
/ˈdraʊnɪŋ/ n.
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溺水
搭配：drowning prevention
例：Prevent drowning accidents.
rush into
/rʌʃ ˈɪntuː/
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冲进；匆忙做
搭配：rush into water
例：Don't rush into the water.
cry for help
/kraɪ fɔːr help/
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呼救
搭配：cry for help loudly
例：Call for help immediately.
put…first
/pʊt fɜːrst/
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把…放在首位
搭配：put safety first
例：Always put safety first.
proper
/ˈprɑːpər/ adj.
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正规的；合适的
搭配：a proper place
例：Go to a proper pool.
SECTION 08
高分技巧 · Writing Tips
5 大得分关键，让你的 Notice 在考场上稳拿高分。
通知格式
Notice 居中加粗、署名右下角、日期顶右下方，这是第一印象分。
祈使句使用
Never / Don't / Do not / Make sure 等开头，使通知语气正式有力。
逻辑连接
First of all / Besides / What's more / Last but not least 让结构清晰。
正式语气
用 would like to / sincerely urge / highly recommend 替代口语表达。
避免中式英语
不说 "wander around rivers"，说 "go near rivers alone" — 见 Section 9。
SECTION 10
课后作业 · Homework
学完即练。请在下方写作区完成新的 Notice 任务。
✍️ 实战演练
主题：暑假交通安全
要求：假定你是学生会主席李华，请写一则英文通知提醒全体同学暑假注意交通安全。
词数：80 词左右。
字数：0